Prelim Final

This is our final edit for the preliminary task^^

Evaluation
I think that our preliminary final edit was successful, in a sense that our vision was recreated, the filming and editing went smoothly and we didn't come across any significant problems. I think that the music that we added in the background worked well with the final piece and is faded in and out well. I also think that we used costume and props efficiently and the location worked well with the narrative because the kitchen scene was a casual, everyday location. As well as mise-en-scene, I think that our narrative and dialogue was created and created tension and suspense which is typical of a thriller, the limited dialogue make the reader ask question which is a positive. We also used a range of different shots which adds to the depth and complexity of our final edit, making it look more professional.
If I was to identify weaknesses to  our final edit, i would definitely say that the editing could have been more seamless and smooth, as it can appear a bit jumpy at times and the different shots don't transition into one another as well as I would like, so when it comes to my real thriller introduction i will focus more on continuity editing. Another weakness could be that the ambient sound in the background is a bit loud and doesn't match the other music, as well, in some parts you can hear people speaking in the background. To resolve this in the real video i could record the ambient sound separately and just mute the noise recorded on the camera.