Application of audience feedback

The main criticism from our audience feedback was that they didn't like vignette effect that we added to our second draft as it was distracting and the edges were quite blunt and so drew their attention away from the actual video. So we tried to feather out the edges of the white boarder to make it look more seamless and have resemblance to a flashback, however the vignette still looked out of place and didn't really add anything to the final piece, so we removed the effect entirely. We also took on advice from our teacher which was to space out the titles as they appeared choppy. Therefore, we dragged out the titles and added a cross dissolve so that they faded out slowly so as not to draw attention away from what was happening on the screen.